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發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 17:35:43 | 只看該作者 回帖獎(jiǎng)勵(lì) |倒序?yàn)g覽 |閱讀模式
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      小弟經(jīng)常吹噓自己在學(xué)新概念,怕自己把這事兒說(shuō)著說(shuō)著就忘了,現(xiàn)在還在基礎(chǔ)階段,獻(xiàn)丑來(lái)一段,,諸大俠莫笑+ c) d" x1 S1 f1 p8 j% f
                                                                                         Journey to Baoji
. K( f+ v8 c. j; z. |5 {* b     As a yong guy who still is interested in playing,how to spend my holiday is a really serious problem for me.As I have little money,the choices for me are very few,I can not afford anything coast much.At the end of last December,I met the problem again,but I am not a guy who does not dare to have a crazy idea.5 W9 T+ y. _* ?7 |$ t) }
After asking a friend comes from Baoji,I got my destation for my holiday,it is Baoji where I would to go .I have several friends there and it is also a city rich in history and the coast would also be little.I am sure it is an ideal place for my vacation.But the most important thing is that I want go there by biycle alone in such a cold winter.
6 T3 l1 N" X9 h    With warm clothes,gloves,torch,enough food, drink,and even spare battery,I got my start at the morning of 31th,December,I was sure it would be a wonderful gift for my new year.At my startline,the time is 7:50pm.I did not check any map before my start because I think it is more interseting if I go the way by my own ability.So I went to south along 210 road,the road which took me to one of the higest mountain of Qinling,there were few people on the way that morning, I rade fast for I had past there several times.but there were several trees new planted fell down on the way,the trees were so large that I had to stop to get a new way,they always do thus stupid things for us as we all know.
1 i8 ]: D( E' f; l0 B   After 210 road,I went to west along 107 road,it is a way located at the north of Qingling mountains,I had a good look at of the mountains on my way to west ,there are many scenry spots along the mountin I had visted several in 2012,I can remember all I had done there.When I was riding there was a message came,I read it at my rest point,it read”happy new year”,came from my phone manager who gave me the opportunities to meet Liangwendao and Qulimin this year and I learnt a lot from them,so I sent a message back to her about what I was doing and how beautiful it is to see the smog along this way with the best wishes to her for the new year.After this I went on riding again,the distence from my point to Baoji was still far enough. To my surprise is that there are several long slope,I had to slow down.to save my energy.Several hours later,I arrived a cross,there was a driver who having a rest,I asked him the distence to Baoji from my point,he told me that there is a half,hearing that I was shocked,may I get my destination on time?But all what I can do that moment is keep riding,I can not give up my plan.
; k5 f. \: D, V' r   To avoid worrying much about the trip,I started to linsten music by a nano borrowed from my friend,it is really important to take it easy at such a nervous moment.When I arrived at the way to Taibai,the highest mountain of Qinling,I asked an old man how to get my destination again,he told me there is a distence of 70km left for me and there are few resterants or hotels along the way, it would be a hard way.After eating the food in my bag I turned on my torch,it is dangerous to ride without it in dark.As a happy fool,I can stay calm when I am alone,I can play game with myself just like sid,so I had a good time in my riding,I had a carefully look at of the stars on sky,we can hardly see these beautiful stars in city,you can have a great share of it.3 ~4 |6 H+ F# G  {6 g1 |8 q3 R
    After 14 hours riding,I got my destation at 10 in night,my friends were waiting me worrily there,one of them laughed”you are a really happy fool”,but all what I wanted that time were food and rest,I was so starve and tired to say any more.
5 g/ F; \4 B( A3 Q( i: J此次旅行從2012.12.31開(kāi)始,結(jié)束于2013.1.3,共計(jì)行程400公里左右,,單人單車(chē),,收獲如下:# t1 x* x" Y+ }/ o% A6 f
            1.        伯努利方程貌似對(duì)卡車(chē)也有效——俺在寶中線返程時(shí)身旁有重型卡車(chē)有高速通過(guò),俺感到了股強(qiáng)烈的氣流,,吹得俺都有擺動(dòng),,然后俺真的明白火車(chē)站那道線的意義…
, ?* P4 T( M1 B  i6 q9 }" U            2.        沖鋒衣PU涂層真的透氣——俺返程后發(fā)現(xiàn)背包帶是濕的,而外套卻是干的,,材料真 的很有趣
8 k( l, P5 r* n" j, ~* Z9 L- T) N            3.        靠估計(jì)不可能一直玩下去——俺朋友的商店吊頂用輕型龍骨,,已經(jīng)有明顯塌陷,他們干活沒(méi)有計(jì)算& H5 _! J& X$ Q' i& K
            4.        沒(méi)文化很可怕——炎帝祠有堵名人題字的墻,,但仔細(xì)看看發(fā)現(xiàn)挺有趣:發(fā)展,、弘揚(yáng)、促進(jìn),、提高,,還有一位要盡早完成祖國(guó)統(tǒng)一的…俺第一感覺(jué)是運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)入場(chǎng)口號(hào)
$ G9 m0 S; N" {0 x0 y* P( h            5.        沒(méi)追求更可怕——朋友的朋友,2012總共工作兩個(gè)月(打工,,兩個(gè)月便放棄),,不讀書(shū)、不做事,,成天無(wú)所事事,,住處垃圾堆得跟山似的,聽(tīng)到俺讀書(shū)的第一句話是“那有啥讀的”
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寫(xiě)的不錯(cuò),,我是指那幾句漢字,!  發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 18:36

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發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 17:53:42 | 只看該作者
寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò),,這會(huì)有點(diǎn)兒眼疼,看的花了,,等會(huì)我再好好看看,不知道之前基礎(chǔ)怎么樣,,寫(xiě)得還是不錯(cuò)的,。繼續(xù)加油,等哪幾我也上來(lái)秀一下,,哈哈,。

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哈哈,期待  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 08:59
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 18:08:34 | 只看該作者
兄弟學(xué)了多久了,在你面前很慚愧啊

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大帥謙虛了...  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 09:00
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 20:53:36 | 只看該作者
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 22:06:30 | 只看該作者
第一句語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤就很多    建議把語(yǔ)法鞏固一下

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壞習(xí)慣很不好改,,你懂的...  發(fā)表于 2013-1-16 08:17
還好吧 其實(shí)中文更講究 咬文嚼字也是門(mén)學(xué)問(wèn)  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 18:51
看到"語(yǔ)法“那個(gè)詞俺就不由自主打哈氣了...  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 16:34
我覺(jué)得語(yǔ)法就像公式 還算比較好玩  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 11:52
中學(xué)老師講語(yǔ)法俺就睡覺(jué)...  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 10:42
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-11 23:23:35 | 只看該作者
樓主還是很有潛力的哦.
: k- l- X& P3 m0 n; H/ j恕我直言,,兄弟寫(xiě)的這段,基本是中文思維和中文語(yǔ)感,。建議樓主盡量多讀多背好的文章,,定有大的突破

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嗯嗯,俺分析過(guò):俺的其他基礎(chǔ)跟大家比都差很多,,貌似只有這個(gè)還差不多,,如果先能把這個(gè)搞定,可能就會(huì)有大俠帶我玩了...  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 10:31
哥們跟你是一樣的基礎(chǔ),,可能比你還差,。其實(shí)能自由地寫(xiě)到這個(gè)程度,已經(jīng)相當(dāng)不錯(cuò),,中國(guó)的工程師,,大都欠缺這個(gè)。  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 09:16
哈哈,,版主好眼力...作為一個(gè)中學(xué)畢業(yè)后就再?zèng)]學(xué)英語(yǔ)的小羅羅,,俺的要走的路還有很長(zhǎng)  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 08:58
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-12 01:47:57 | 只看該作者
無(wú)論如何,寫(xiě)了這么多都要鼓勵(lì)一下,,俺除了考GRE作文之前突進(jìn)那陣子,,都沒(méi)怎么寫(xiě)過(guò)這么長(zhǎng)的。不知道為什么不能給你加分,。,。。
! Q+ Z) p1 u4 f7 p: }; a' i好多語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤可以被word校正,。
* ^( Y& e, L5 P7 u4 f6 \這篇如果給外國(guó)人看的話,,可能看得不是很順暢,但大意能懂,。話說(shuō)回來(lái),,中國(guó)人寫(xiě)的東西,有幾個(gè)能讓外國(guó)人看得通暢呢 4 u' p" C/ p* j6 G5 T  U
他們自己寫(xiě)的東西也都語(yǔ)病連連,,簡(jiǎn)單一例, I don't know nothing about this,,怎么翻譯?習(xí)慣用法而已,。語(yǔ)言本來(lái)就是說(shuō)的人多了,,錯(cuò)的也成了對(duì)的。; j; z- t& f+ E- k0 Y
能交流是目的,,樓主加油,!6 L6 n! i2 F5 l1 ^

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多謝大俠美言,俺的英文閱讀量還基本沒(méi)有,不扯遠(yuǎn)的,,先把3讀完再說(shuō)  發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 08:56
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-12 18:44:15 | 只看該作者
佩服一下,。。俺在寶雞的說(shuō)
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-13 15:39:09 | 只看該作者
想學(xué)英語(yǔ) 但音標(biāo)都忘記了
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發(fā)表于 2013-1-14 08:24:31 | 只看該作者
當(dāng)初學(xué)的時(shí)候也沒(méi)在意

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